Telaris's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vortonox - Intermission (TimeShocked Remix)]

Needs a heavy Kick and Snare, Bass, and Sub dude...

Oh and those highs in the Wobble, take em Out!

TimeShockGD responds:

Thanks for the feed back!

[Derpcat - Seventh Dimension]

Late as hell but whatever...

This is one of your most unique tracks to date, like Melodic Orchestral Dubstep mixed with epic alternative madness...

It's pretty outdated for todays standards when it comes mixing, but whatever.

I love this (IDK why I never found this before)… great job to old Derpcat

Heyy, what about a VIP of this song?!

DerpcatOfficial responds:

thansk! i actually will make a sequel!

[Yeet]

SIdeChaiN tHe DrOp

entropicvoxels responds:

yeet (yes i definitely should have done this)

[Lemuria]

Ohhh yeahhh

This song
Good job, I love the composition.

The original is so bad lol

Tennon responds:

Yeah the original was done when I was 14 so its supposed to be bad. Btw love the hentai profile pic lol

[Flaaroni - Tractor Beam]

Pretty good (Especially considering Future Bounce is down very low on my genre list, then again, its not nearly as bad as Riddim Dubstep)

I do have some feedback for you because that's just what producers do. The synths and basses could use some more reverb (you don't need a fancy plugin to so reverb, fruity reverb 2 works just fine) and delay. Don't be afraid to use more reverb than what is already in this track. Delay would be nice too.

I personally think you took to much of the Sub out. Every track needs some sub, I used to always forget the sub, don't be like me. Electronic music is difficult because you need to know the right amount of lows and highs to take out. I haven't quite figured that out either yet.

The songs volume is fairly constant for the most part, I do strongly believe it could be louder (Mabey raise the volume of those synths 13-15 decibels).

In general, this song is REALLY empty, it needs some chords and arps. I recommend listening to other artists works, basically take notes. This trick has REALLY helped me.

Don't worry about making mistakes, I was full of them. I'm still recovering from multiple errors I made in previous tracks. Its ok. You will make stupid decisions.

Lastly, I wanted to Introduce you to the concept of storytelling. In my opinion, a successful track tells a story throughout the track. What I'm hearing in this song is all about partying, this is the big reason electronic producers get so much hate. Haters claim they don't have a meaning behind them, that's not true for everyone. Some people like music that doesn't tell a story. But I recommend it. It will double impress your fans.

If you read this than thank you for taking your time. I hope this helped you even the slightest bit.

Edit: I just posted this and I can already see the toxic hate the GD community will give me.

Flaaroni responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I'll definitely take the mixing advice into account. I will say that my intention for the track wasn't to tell a story, but that's something I need to work on nevertheless. And I definitely agree with the track, the intro especially, being empty. I tried to go for detail on the drop, but I definitely rushed the intro.

[[NGADM 2019] ẄL - Circuit Realm]

Tbh you need heavier snares my dude. That melodic dubstep part is pretty empty without that. The Electro House part is really good tho

SUNSCREECH responds:

Yeah i've been told this track was feeling too empty before lol
Thanks for your opinion though, I'll definitely consider it

[AlieN - Lost (Melodic Mid-Tempo)]

Ok first off. I really don’t know the difference between Midtempo and Moombahcore so this may be a bit biased

Overall this is great. The first drop was cool but anticlimactic. The basses could use some compression. The composition is done really well (Why the hell am I talking about composition. I’m not 3ye). The second drop was OK. The drums actually could use some compression as well. But yeah, the modulation on the last bass in the second drop is insane. And you’ve definitely nailed the sound design.

In conclusion, a very good first attempt at Midtempo/ Moombahcore?. But still could use some work

AlienNinjaGD responds:

Thanks!