Telaris's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{dj-N} Final Theory]

Best one, change my mind.

[Derpcat - You]

Breakbeat? Trance? Dubstep? Idk. But this is by far my favorite song from the EP. It reminds me of F-777s music. I have a feeling that’s what you were going for. My only complaint is the drops may be a tad to long. But whatever, awesome job.

[Party in the USSR]

When Stalin discovered Moombahcore.

[Divergence (feat. AETHERIA)]

This is some good shit

[Flaaroni - Tractor Beam]

Pretty good (Especially considering Future Bounce is down very low on my genre list, then again, its not nearly as bad as Riddim Dubstep)

I do have some feedback for you because that's just what producers do. The synths and basses could use some more reverb (you don't need a fancy plugin to so reverb, fruity reverb 2 works just fine) and delay. Don't be afraid to use more reverb than what is already in this track. Delay would be nice too.

I personally think you took to much of the Sub out. Every track needs some sub, I used to always forget the sub, don't be like me. Electronic music is difficult because you need to know the right amount of lows and highs to take out. I haven't quite figured that out either yet.

The songs volume is fairly constant for the most part, I do strongly believe it could be louder (Mabey raise the volume of those synths 13-15 decibels).

In general, this song is REALLY empty, it needs some chords and arps. I recommend listening to other artists works, basically take notes. This trick has REALLY helped me.

Don't worry about making mistakes, I was full of them. I'm still recovering from multiple errors I made in previous tracks. Its ok. You will make stupid decisions.

Lastly, I wanted to Introduce you to the concept of storytelling. In my opinion, a successful track tells a story throughout the track. What I'm hearing in this song is all about partying, this is the big reason electronic producers get so much hate. Haters claim they don't have a meaning behind them, that's not true for everyone. Some people like music that doesn't tell a story. But I recommend it. It will double impress your fans.

If you read this than thank you for taking your time. I hope this helped you even the slightest bit.

Edit: I just posted this and I can already see the toxic hate the GD community will give me.

Flaaroni responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I'll definitely take the mixing advice into account. I will say that my intention for the track wasn't to tell a story, but that's something I need to work on nevertheless. And I definitely agree with the track, the intro especially, being empty. I tried to go for detail on the drop, but I definitely rushed the intro.

[[NGADM 2019] ẄL - Circuit Realm]

Tbh you need heavier snares my dude. That melodic dubstep part is pretty empty without that. The Electro House part is really good tho

SUNSCREECH responds:

Yeah i've been told this track was feeling too empty before lol
Thanks for your opinion though, I'll definitely consider it

[the spike is over there]

Time to fuckin leave newgrounds Lmao.

I cant with this song, I understand this is a joke, but

alkali, just remember that this song is dry as hell, USE REVERB