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Telaris

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I don't like Psytrance at all, but I'm not complaining because I have to start making music again with FL Stock plugins, so good job on the second drop

That's some god shit right here, amazing stuff dude. Now that I know you entered the NGADM I'm glad I withdrew haha, you would've easily smashed me with your outstanding talent. Sorry I wasn't able to review this earlier, my last computer fried itself and I had to get a new computer. But anyways, this is definitely my new favorite from you. I can't even imagine what you could've done if you weren't on a timer to make this song!

I'm down with this, I do have one complaint.

The First drop lead (What Sapphire Snake was talking about) is raised to high, when you do that it creates a fuck ton of unbearable freqs that are not pleasant to the ear. There are two ways to solve this, one, lower it an octave, or two, EQ those things out. Honestly, looking at the description of the track, EQing can fix the problems those guys stated without fucking up the song. IDK how to explain this trick but literally every EDM YouTuber uses it in tutorials (It works best with Leads and Saws, hence why I'm suggesting you use it).

In Conclusion this song was far from perfect but REALLY far from shit, your getting there. You melody's do really impress me, as I can always see what you we're going for just by hearing the melody (Not to mention their catchy AF). Keep it up, AlieN (With a capital N at the end ofc)

- Despayre/Telaris

AlienNinjaGD responds:

ayyy thanks so much dude!
about the lead, it actually has alot of eqing, im probably not cutting the right freqs

I just found a problem

I cant tell which part is yours and which part is Tal's...

DerpcatOfficial responds:

the orchestral DnB part is his, the rest is mine haha

TeslaX11 responds:

that's why it's just ft. and not collab

That melody sounds very familiar...

But great job, the beat's are super smooth, the synths are really nice.

Nothing else I can say,

Great work

The mixing could be a bit better, some of the highs are bit to harsh on the ear. Their's an EQing method where you can scan for bad frequency's (Look it up because I cant explain it very well lol) and it works even if you don't have headphones. I dig the sound design though. It reminded me a lot of F-777's 2015 stuff (I think that's the year).

Anyways, this is overall very good (It may be a bit repetitive), I hope to see more from you soon.

SUNSCREECH responds:

thanks for your feedback!

yeah i still have quite the amount of stuff to learn about balancing, that's my weakest point so far i would say

Knowing you, I already know it gonna be good (Will listen to it later IMO everyone in my house is asleep and it would piss them off if I woke them up)

Nice Logo BTW, hope to see more from you this year.

Edit: Holy Shit! I just realized it's 10 Minutes long. Where do you get this motivation! Hell, I think that's the best part about this song! The song isn't repetitive, It's interesting the whole way through, and it's 10 MINUTES! I will respect you forever

Needs a heavy Kick and Snare, Bass, and Sub dude...

Oh and those highs in the Wobble, take em Out!

TimeShockGD responds:

Thanks for the feed back!

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